If you paste the text of your draft here or describe the essay topic and your main goals, I can help you refine it, check the flow, or give you feedback on specific sections.
I can't open the .zip file you mentioned, so I can't see the specific draft or prompt you're working on. tzMb2jzYx5QoPodJ6pqYc.zip
: Summarize your main ideas and leave the reader with a final thought rather than just repeating yourself. If you paste the text of your draft
: Use specific examples or data to back up your points. I can help you refine it